don’t know why i suddenly remember you
gee, i apparently miss you too
so i buzz u with a short note to ring
hoping someone throw back anything
are you still there?
please please be there? (revised)
don’t know why i suddenly remember you
gee, i apparently miss you too
so i buzz u with a short note to ring
hoping someone throw back anything
are you still there?
please please be there? (revised)
should be : will you be there?
(from an old veteran English Teacher)
Really be, probably with bold. Cause it tend to highlight the ‘there’ term.